Sunday, November 15, 2009

Like On Venus

Lives are measured in days
In the place of years
The Heroes
Are those who bear the pressure and stand
While everyone else sucks on lava
Bodies crushed like tin cans from the air
Maybe more like bodies than tin cans

An ocean of liquid rock
An island in the center
The sand smelt into glass
And palms trees
With red leaves and fireball fruit

3 comments:

Joseph Moullet said...

some of this is good, some of this could use revision.

Jenny Napoleon said...

Why do you comment on your own blogs?

Anonymous said...

do u write these all on your own or do you just not put the author's name in there?